The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job. I enjoy it when a poem paints a vivid picture for me like this piece did.
Good title. Good message. I liked your description of how the fruit of gossip transforms from a sneeze into a disease. So true. Good work!
11/08/10
This does a fantastic job of showing just how ugly and destructive gossip is. I love the imagery of the germ turning into a disease. Great writing!
11/08/10
So very good! Loved each clever line :-)
11/08/10
Charming
Disarming
Sweet
Neat
Ever so slightly alarming
11/08/10
You found a host of absolutely perfect metaphors to describe Gertrude's wagging tongue. Your clever delivery was so enjoyable. Fun with an excellent message!
11/08/10
In a nutshell, you tell the story of someone familiar to all. Just great, as always.
I love limericks, and you chose some good rhyming words. Great job!
11/09/10
Such fun to read! Great work!