The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/07
Oh, wow. This was amazing. I can't understand why no one has commented yet! Maybe you left everyone else speechless. ;) The emotions come out so clearly, and you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Wonderful job!
03/05/07
Very well done. What a strong commitment to Christ displayed here. Great writing!
What a great piece depicting what might have been in the early Church days. I loved the ending.
03/06/07
Good work! The pace was good and the dialogue good too!
03/12/07
Hi Casie. I judged this topic and loved your story. It placed 14th overall on my tally sheet. Great work!
Wow! What a powerful piece! Excellent writing! and exceptionally inspiring!

03/29/07
One of a writer's most valuable tools is the ability to create tension and resolution. You did this beautifully here.
03/29/07
Just exceptional, Tab! Sent chills down my spine. So compelling!
03/29/07
Wow! What a testimony and example! I'm so glad you had that ending--the fruit of their witness. Excellent!