The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
This had me smiling. It's so clever and so well done. It couldn't have been easy to write, but you did a great job on it.
03/15/06
This is really good. Keep writing!
03/16/06
This is absolutely BRILLIANT!!!!! It has a strong message, it is really humorous (which always helps we 'normal people' focus!), the poetry works really really well ... I just love it. And what a unique take on 'lock'!
03/16/06
Alot of work went into this take on "lock"...and it was also witty! Nice job and well done...poor 'ole Samson! (smile)
03/16/06
I love this, girlfriend! I can see it being done as a "rap" in a teen-led service. So clever, and a bit of a change of pace for you. I knew from the boards that you had a very funny side--nice to see it here, too.
03/16/06
Way to go Miss Rapper of Poetry! Yes! I can see the kids now! This is a keeper girl!
Fantastic!!!!!! Awesome job!
03/17/06
My feet were tapping as I read this. Loved it!
03/17/06
Very well done!
03/18/06
Marvelous! I can hear it now being done before a crowd! WoW! This is great!
03/29/07
I love what you did with this topic. Biblical but so topical for teens especially to comprehend. It looked like a fun one to write.
04/02/07
How fun! I really enjoyed reading this. I'm still chuckling from a few of the lines, especially liked the tone of this piece. ^_^