The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/13
Oh...I simply adore this piece! Beautiful job with the topic, and glorious message annoucning the birth of our Savior! Clever,playful and reverent at once. LOVED IT! I pray this does well with the judges...

God bless~
05/27/13
I have a big smile on my face for this one. Lovely story, so well written I could see each character!
05/27/13
This is SO clever!

My ONLY suggestion (and it's a small one) would be to change the size of the toy soldier... If he's an ornament, 14 inches would be a bit big... If he's meant to stand beside the tree, then I'd have made that a bit clearer.

I loved this. It's like Toy Story, Christmas Edition. :)
05/27/13
I wish my tree would decorate itself. :) I really enjoyed your characters.
I was missing the topic tie-in until it arrived on cue. Well done.
This is very creatively done and an enjoyable read.
05/29/13
I love these ornaments. Well done! Keep Writing!
05/30/13
The imagery and personification used to create this well-written fiction story captured my attention right away. I enjoyed it tremendously! Well written! You have shown that you can write fiction just as creatively as you write your memoirs.I am so "envious." LOL
Congratulations for ranking 3 in your level and 15 overall!