The Official Writing Challenge
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12/17/10
Interesting... thanks for the translation!
The dialogue was great for teenage girls.
Cute story! I like how it's lighthearted but at the same time deals with a very serious issue. Real to life.
Interesting. Never knew scrapbooking could be so... loud. :o)

Good job portraying the language of scrapbooking, but even more so, the language of friendship. Keep writing.
Great idea for a "foreign" language. I really felt for your MC.
12/22/10
It DID sound like a foreign language. There was so much happening in this story...it was a great read with believable dialogue. I liked how "foreign language" wasn't the main part of the story but it fit in nicely without being forced.
The ending hit me in the gut hard. I went through a hard time and hoped my kids didn't know but somehow they manage to know more than we want them to. You did an outstanding job with this one. Congratulations for placing in the top 10 of your level!