The Official Writing Challenge
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You have such talent. The rhymes were wonderful and I envy your sense of rhythm, not to mention your wonderful sense of humour!
Cute and just the right touch of humor.
08/08/10
Good lesson here. Jesus loved the untouchables and the outcasts. We should, too, no matter what their appearance or smell.
Great poem and great message. I enjoyed it!
08/11/10
This is alot of fun, and a good message too.
How true. God's love conquers everything, including smells. ;) Good job!
I enjoyed following the family of uncouth as they received the smile of God through the preacher and his wife.
08/11/10
I loved it.Poor Old Uncouths.
Blessings, Ruth
08/12/10
Oh man! I guess I should go take a shower or you might be writing a poem about me next! Very cute poem! I'm most impressed:)
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