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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: The Pen is Mightier than the Sword (04/08/10)

TITLE: Fifth Grade Thievery
By Phee Paradise
04/14/10


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Dear Kayla
Why did you sit by Meghan on the bus today? I saved you a seet
Your best frend
Lauren

Dear Lauren,
She asked me to. You didnít have to get so mad.
Your best friend,
Kayla

Dear Kayla
I wasnít mad at you I was mad at her.
Your best frend
Lauren

Dear Lauren,
You shouldnít be mad at her sheís nice.
Your best friend,
Kayla

Dear Kayla,
Sheís not nice!!!!!! she stole my best frend Why did you sit with her at lunch?
Your lonesome best friend
Lauren

Dear Lauren,
Meghan says I make her laugh. You should have sat with us.
Your friend,
Kayla

Dear Kayla,
You make me laugh too. I donít like Meghan.
Your best frend
Lauren

Dear Lauren,
If you want to sit with me you have to like Meghan.
Your friend,
Kayla

Dear Meghan the frend stealer,
Why did you steal my best frend?
Kaylaís best frend
Lauren

Dear Lauren,
Why did you write to Meghan? Now she wonít sit with me.
Kayla

Dear Kayla
Good
Your ex best frend

Dear Meghan,
Why wonít you sit with me? Lauren doesnít care because sheís not my best friend anymore and she hates me. Now I donít have anyone to sit with.
Your friend, Kayla

Dear Kayla,
If youíre not frends with Meghan anymore do you want to be my best frend again? but you have to sit with me ALL the time!!!!!
Your real best frend
Lauren

Dear Meghan
Donít talk to Kayla anymore sheís MY frend.
Kaylaís best frend
Lauren

Dear Lauren,
Donít tell me who to talk to. Meghanís nice and youíre not.
Kayla

Dear Meghan,
You are a terribal person I am going to beat you up in the playground at recess tomorrow I will hit you and kick you
I hate you
Lauren

Dear Lauren,
You canít beat up Meghan. I wonít let you,
Kayla

Dear Kayla
MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS
Lauren

Meghan,
You are a chicken
Lauren

Meghanís not a chicken. She was sick. You are stupid and you canít spell.
Kayla

Dear Lauren,
Why did you hit Meghan? You are so mean. Now I donít have any friends.
Your ex friend,
Kayla

Dear Meghan
Mrs. Foster says I have to apologise to you for hitting you so I apologise.
Lauren
P.S. Iím not sorry
P.S.S. Youíre still a friend stealer

Dear Kayla,
I apologise to Meghan. Can we be friends now?
Your friend
Lauren
I can too spell. See

Dear Lauren,
I forgive you. Iím sorry I made you and Kayla mad at each other. I just wanted someone to sit with. I like you both and I think you should like each other again. Do you want to come to my house? I have a playhouse.
Love,
Meghan
P.S. Jesus said I should forgive you. He forgives you too.

Dear Meghan,
We can come to your house tomorrow. Do you want to sit with us at lunch and be our best friend?
Love,
Lauren and Kayla


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 04/15/10
This is so typical of girls that age. I love it. I really think it is a brilliant example of how kids can treat each other. The message came through loud and clear.
Yvonne Blake 04/15/10
Smile... I love this! You really captured the typical rivalry of 5th grade girls. Well done!
Margaret Kearley 04/16/10
This made me smile! Brilliant! Any of us who have had daughters could just re-live this dialogue!
Ruth Stromquist04/22/10
Very innovative way of telling a story. A fun read! Congrats!
Noel Mitaxa 04/24/10
You've captured how intense, how innocent and how volatile childish emotions can be. Brilliant protrayal, and well-deserved recognition by our judging panel. Congratulations.