The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/07
A very entertaining poem with a great solution to making certain people who are hungry receive the food they need. My favorite stanza was the first, I loved the language and the rhythm. I was glad to see it repeated towards the end. The repetion added to the strength of the poem and the story it tells. I enjoyed this light-hearted tale and the principle of feeding those who are hungry and in doing it, we feed Christ as He fed us. Thank you for the read and the inspiration!
03/11/07
I enjoyed your well-constructed poem and the message included in it. Kudos!
03/13/07
Very nice! The long title caught my eye, glad I stopped to read it. Very vivid descriptions and a lot of feeling packed into this piece. I liked the verse with shopping and havine misc. spilling into the cart. Sounds so much like me ^_^
03/13/07
Great poem! I liked their solution to the problem. How to help the homeless is something I've struggled with.
03/13/07
I enjoyed the rhythm of this very much! It flowed very nicely - and I enjoyed the message.
03/14/07
I very much enjoyed the story this poem had to tell! A couple times I've had the privilege of shopping to help those in need and was so blessed by it! Well done! :)
03/14/07
Awesome poetic structure, great message, lots of fun stuff here. You say you're a beginner at poetry? You wouldn't know it!
03/14/07
I really liked the flow of your poem! Keep up on writing!
03/15/07
Great flow! Great message!
03/15/07
I LOVED the title and the poem didn't disappoint at all. I thought the entire thing was well crafted with a poignant message.