The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
Love the analogy - and your tender yet true message. I can't imagine you'll be in beginners long!
07/22/07
This is crafted very well and really lovely to read. I agree with Joanne; you'll be moving up soon!
07/22/07
I loved how you weaved the story from the lines of this song. Very creative and inspirational. Good writing..
It's so easy to forget that the Father's discipline leads to happiness. Thanks for the reminder.
Very good writing! Your skills are above beginner level, in my opinion. Loved it!