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TITLE: Writing for HIM | Previous Challenge Entry
By Becky Depp
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The ink from my pen bleeds through
I'm writing down my thoughts
I daily think, about you.
I write about my love to you
How sweet and sensitive you are,
How we talk everyday, at all times
And when I need you, you are not far.
My Lord, Jesus! How I love you so
You love me, forgive me, and heal me
Yet I’m not perfect as you are
I can't live up to you, I must agree.
You gave me my gift of writing
Although you come first in my heart
I thank you for everything you've done for me
And I hope we shall never part.
My life, and everything I do is in your hands
And for that, my writing is dedicated to you
Because I trust you completely
You are my life forever an ever, this I say is true.
Now I close my book for the day,
And I say a quick prayer to you
I thank you, once again, for everything
I tell you that I love you, but this is far from Adieu.
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Consider changing the title to "Writing for You", since the poem is all addressed to Christ. And be careful of confusing "a crossed" with "across."
You have some very nice words and images here.