The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/13
Good message here...Thanks.

God bless~
This is an interesting devotion. You make some great points in this piece. It made me stop and think which is always a good thing. I did notice quite a few typos, missing words, and changing from present tense to past and back again. A good proofreader will help you catch these little things. You did a nice job of writing on topic while still delivering a good message. The Scriptures you chose were a perfect fit for your message. Good job.
01/28/13
Yes, the Lord gives wisdom freely and liberally, and in Him we have abundant rest that is wholesome.
I enjoyed reading your article!