The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the story and the wrap-up devotional message.I would have liked it to be a little longer, however you were on point with the topic and had a satisfying conclusion. Well done.
01/26/13
A concise and pertinent piece...Nicely told and done. God bless~
This is a great devotion. I really liked how you showed a time in your life that was difficult. I think pretty much everyone can relate to that. Then you did a nice job of transitioning to your message. You covered the topic while still giving a good message. I could almost hear the snores as I read. Good job.
01/30/13
This writing disappoints me. It fails to deliver the promise of the title. It also seems desperate to gain mooring on the topic. But, and this is far more important - the story is unpretentious and personal, in the telling, and in the approach. So, seeds of persuasion are planted, and only require you to cultivate the tools necessary to yield their full harvests. Please, keep pen to paper
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level one!