The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/24
"He changed me; I did not do it by myself." That really sticks out and I love the simplicity of it. This is a great story about how we should step out in obedience, even if it feels awkward. Wonderful message!
This is a lovely story. I can relate to the characters more than I care to admit. The dialog felt a bit stiff. Using contractions, incomplete sentences, and even slang could make it more authentic. Using body language can also express a lot of emotions too. I really enjoyed the theme of this great story. I liked your take on the topic. It was fresh and delivered a clear, Christian message.
Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!