The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story that pulled me in from the beginning right to the end. You did have a subtle POV shift that could easily be fixed either by having Jake's thoughts said aloud or omitting the line: I was amazed by the ways... Overall, though, you did a great job of delivering a clear Christian message that was spot on topic.
I love how you show how God engages with us in different ways and how sharing our experiences can inspire others.
Blessings