The Official Writing Challenge
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Short and to the point!
Yes!
He is; I am not
Blessings
You have a profound message. I thought it was a clever idea. My only critique might be not that it was short, but that you only had about 100 words of your own. However, with that said, the verses you selected were quite profound and you definitely delivered a clear, Christian message and nailed the topic.