The Official Writing Challenge
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A beautiful prayer.
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08/24/24
What a great message you share in this entry. I also love the title “ I long for Shalom” but felt that the piece contained the actual word peace a few too many times. I know that it is kind of the theme but I would have loved it even more if you could have found other ways of saying it.
Congratulations!
Congratulations on placing 8th in Editor's Choice. I like your interpretation of the seventh beatitude.