The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/24
Well thought out. I think we all have a deep-down longing for Eden.
Very well done--thought provoking.
07/16/24
Such a beautiful Biblical-based full picture of the future we look forward to as Christian Brothers and Sisters. I had to read it twice and I am sure I still didn't receive all the fullness of your beautiful picture. I look forward to reading more of what the Holy Spirit has to say through you.
07/18/24
Nice flow and parallel structure throughout. The dichotomy between the fallen world and Eden is consistent and powerful. Lovely poem.
07/20/24
Beautifully and skillfully written. We do hunger after Eden. Great job. Congratulations on your 8th place EC.