The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/23
Loved this!
Blessings~
10/27/23
Such a nice way to use the word "brisk"! Your comparison with briskness and being refreshed was...refreshing!
Both the choice of words and the rhythm of your poem convey a feeling of briskness.

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