The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm enjoying Parson Booker. I'm reading Janette Oke right now, and your stories remind me of hers. You nailed the topic while delivering a clear Christian message in a fun intriguing way.
12/16/22
What a great use of the topic. One phrase I really liked “ The cabin was so silent you could hear a mouse scamper across the fireplace.” A fresh way of showing the silence. I liked these characters especially the parson. Very enjoyable with a good, on topic message. Great job.
Nice work.
I warmed to the sweetness of the personal relationship the Lord establishes with us.
I felt a shade untethered until in your story the Lord whispered to Caleb “he has much to learn”.
I've learned the Word is the sweetest whisper and it is the two- edged sword between my spirit and my soul.
Great story.