The Official Writing Challenge
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I could relate to poor Toby. I was in color guard in marching band and couldn't stay in step to save my life. It was the band teacher who called me out though and there was no miraculous cure for my inability to hear the music and stay in step. I was totally invested in Toby and rooting him on the entire way.
02/06/22
Loved this!
It held my attention and interest all the way through.
Well done.

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