The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/16
This I a a delightful story. It is fast paced & kept my attention from beginning to end- building suspense along the way.
08/10/16
You had me going there! Good story. I stayed interested throughout. Good job!
This is really cute. You did a great job of building the suspense and developing the characters.