The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/22
Take your main theme of instant gratification and then build your argument around it. Start with a strong hook to grab the reader's attention. Don't simply tell the reader the Garden of Eden story. Put the reader in the garden with Adam and Eve. Show the tension of instant gratification vs. obedience. Make the reader feel the angst. Make the reader feel the regret of humanity's downfall due to poor choices.

There is so much potential in this. Learn to write active, not passive. Bring the reader to a satisfying conclusion ... there's always hope, joy, peace, forgiveness in God, etc. keep writing!