The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/21
The challenge was hard to follow. The writing was good but the challange didn't flow. It was cumbersome and broken up in pieces. There were kernels of truth in the writing but the nuggets didn't connect into a comprehensive essay or story.
04/20/21
I think you have some important kernels of truth in this article. Hone in on the message you want to convey and take care out other good points that aren’t zeroed into that topic and put them into a different article. Evil is a very strong word and I do believe there is much evil but I would use the word carefully. The scripture references wee a little confusing because of how they were scattered. Keep writing you have a great heart for God’s truth and love of His word.