The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/17
I really liked the ending of your story.

God's provisions are amazing.

I thought if we got to know one of the children at the Bethany home, it would have invoked more emotions.

I really appreciate all of your efforts to help the children at Bethany.



08/26/17
On the news tonight, the broadcaster mentioned that a home for addicted mothers and children might have to close its doors. The name of the home is, Bethany. I hope someone steps up to the challenge of funding them.

What a blessing you must be to the people who walk through your doors.
I felt this to be a hastily written piece but filled with anxiety but hope.

Jesus said it first: "Let the little children come unto me."
I felt this to be a hastily written piece but filled with anxiety but hope.

Jesus said it first: "Let the little children come unto me."
Standing in faith during such a trying time is a challenge all right! Thank you for sharing your real-life challenge with us. I am humbled.