The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/16
What a great message. Yes, we do need Jesus at the center or nothing we do is worth it! Thank you for this reminder.
A few red ink issues: 1) Your dialogue feels a little unnatural in places, especially the remarks that people made after the puzzle was completed. 2) Only use a semi-colon between two complete sentences.
Thank you for your story!
12/02/16
I loved this whole piece, the message and the entry!

Well done.

God bless~
12/02/16
What a great idea with this puzzle for the church. The pastor might add how much he appreciates their help keeping the church running smoothly. Good job! Blessings, LaVonne
12/04/16
I remember a Christmas dinner where each table was given a puzzle to put together. It was great fun and a good icebreaker.
12/05/16
Great angle to start the story from Anne and Frank's point of view and then embrace their problem as a common one shared by the group and finally show at the end how the person who solved everyone's problem solved his own too in the process
12/05/16
Your story had a great message about working as one in unity. Good job.
Yes, and no one can sit in our place when we are seated.

Either in the building or in the community, we are to be salt and light.

Nice exercise in writing.
12/08/16
Great story and a wonderful message about how every piece is needed. Well done.