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04/28/16
What a wonderful way to see the experience the beauty of the stars and planets - with the man-made satellites thrown in. Your children have a benefit city children miss out on.
Just a small red-ink note - I guess you meant "all planets rise in the east..." not west.

I enjoyed reading it. It brought back childhood memories, being far out at sea and seeing the stars and planets, with big brother explaining what was what.
04/28/16
I loved this read, beautifully written...well done.

Blessings~
04/29/16
Ah this brought back a flood of memories doing just the same thing with my husband and boys when they were younger! Great read - no read ink comments to make other than Lisa's!
05/05/16
April and autumn confused me, but I lived in the southern hemisphere where seasons were backwards so perhaps that's where you were.
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