The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/16
What a wonderful Christian heritage you have. I'm glad you've shared it. One suggestion is to watch your punctuation, especially comas.
01/29/16
What a wonderful Christian heritage you have. I'm glad you've shared it. One suggestion is to watch your punctuation, especially comas.
01/29/16
What a wonderful Christian heritage you have. I'm glad you've shared it. One suggestion is to watch your punctuation, especially comas.
01/29/16
Excellent!

I loved it.

God Bless~
01/29/16
I think you could use a stronger opening, and proof for punctuation errors. It was an interesting story though.
01/30/16
Thanks for sharing this story. It is lovely having a Christian heritage.

It reminds me of commandment that says, "Honour your father and mother, that it may go well with you, and that you may live long in the land."