The Official Writing Challenge
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Well-said! Lovely story. Truly He is our source and no other.
12/15/07
I could hardly read the last paragraph as the tears blurred my vision. Such a wonderful, warm, enlightening story! So beautifully told, and made my gloomy day bright. Thank you! Truly a delightful entry for the topic this week...The Church.
12/16/07
Descriptive, captivating story. Divide and conquer; that's what the enemy of God tries to do. If we persevere with our fellowship, nothing can destroy God's church.
12/16/07
Wow - this description is so vivid, and the words wonderful and convicting. This could use some polish (grammar, punctuation, etc., especially in the first paragraph), but the story is sound and very moving.
12/17/07
I love the title and the descriptions in the first two paragraphs...this is a strong entry.

FYI--"inhabitants" and "eaves" in the first paragraph.

This is a heartwarming story.
Loved the story! Keep at it!