The Official Writing Challenge
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Outstanding, from the first word. Terrific word choices, elegant delivery, leaves a great after-taste.

Thanks for posting. This one is a homerun.
This really made me smile. I could see your tender heart in how you expressed yourself.
I admired the character the moment I realized she had taken on VBS! Terrific read!
Delightful! Iloved every line. Congratulations!
Isn't it goose-bumpy when God speaks so clearly to us in moments like this. And He is speaking through you, too, not only to the kids at the VBS, but to many more through your writing too. Your descriptions were just beautiful - as good as a photograph, actually. Or better ... perhaps as good as an oil painting. Well done!
Yes LYNNE you were willing, and God did the rest. And today I congratulate you for the 2nd prize win. Halelujah!