The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/24
Thanks for bringing to life an incident that had somehow slipped through my radar. It has made me want to go back and read it again
A good story in the Bible to take on the subject.
Blessings
This is a great read. It pulled me in right away. I noticed some minor punctuation errors, a semicolon instead of a colon, a missing question mark, a hyphen instead of an em dash. Those are minor things though. You did a great job of retelling the story, were spot on topic, and had a clear purpose for the story.