The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/23
I'm assuming this is a poem, but it starts out in rhythm and goes to out of rhythm (beginning with the 3rd line).
I see the point you're making within the whole poem, but a scripture at the end would have given it more clarity.
Very well written, though! Keep writing and may God richly bless you in your upcoming writing adventures!?