The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this article. It taught me several things I never knew nor would likely learn without reading this piece. I really liked the different take on cabin. It was a refreshing difference from all the cabin in the woods stories. Be careful about your transitions. They are a bit rough and that is one of the judging criteria (you can find the rest on the message boards). It felt sudden and it was hard to follow if you were in past or present. Those would be easy fixes. I liked your message and the Scriptures you picked were a great fit. You've a great start and I look forward to reading more of your work.
09/21/22
I loved your title, and I really enjoyed your entry, thank you so much for sharing.
Nicely done,
God bless~
09/22/22
Congrats,
God Bless~