The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 377 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
This is a powerful piece. The rhyme and rhythm seem to flow nicely to my ear (Poetry isn't my strongest genre as I have trouble hearing rhythm, so it may not be perfect, but sounded great to my muted ear). It flowed nicely, was on topic, and had a clear Christian message.
A very powerful piece full of significant truths.
Clear, reflective and thought-provoking. Well done.
Congratulations Jim on this wonderful description of a Christian’s life. You seem to be a regular on the Editor’s Choice too. Great work.