The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful entry. It has everything as far as I'm concerned - well done.
That is a powerful story well told. Thank you for sharing this.
I imagined the entire event and shared all your emotions. This childhood prank is relatable; I did not have a bike but I had a dog which I had to carry home. Thanks for sharing.
02/19/22


Jennifer, well done! What a deserved win the Yellow Bicycle was! The flow, the tone, content, diction and style were excellent.
This is a powerful story that brought a lump to my throat. With some tightening and tweaking, I think it could be a powerful story for kids today. That's a great compliment from me because I believe YA stories are the hardest to write and some of the most important writing out there. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 16th overall. Happy Dance!