The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely piece. It flowed effortlessly and created a beautiful picture in my mind. I had trouble seeing the topic in this piece, although I can see a stretch in being patient while following the star and while the Jews waited for the Messiah. This is a beautiful poem and it would make a lovely song, a great greeting card or a beautiful plague.
I found myself creating a tune to the words. Lovely flow.
A few slow down, stumble points but remembering the treasure of patience 😂 I re-adjusted my tempo and flowed on.
Thank you
12/09/21
Beautiful poem, and timely as we enter the Christmas season.