The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/21
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem, laughing while I read it. Love can be so blind, so painful but so incredibly beautiful as well.
09/09/21
Very creative. Something I think most people could relate to. Loved it.

I did notice a minor spelling error/typo “fulfill” (but we’ve all done that a time or two).
09/12/21
Entertaining, and very real.

Unique, well crafted and well communicated.

Keep writing.
Sad. But as for the writing, I usually just skip poetry - bores my simple mind…but this one kept me interested throughout, so you did something right.
09/13/21
I'm not much of a poetry aficionado however your entry kept my mind completely engaged and entertained.

Well done and yikes...