The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/21
I always enjoy your stories. You really capture the super hero and provide great detail.Just two small things in your title it should be “into” rather than “in to” and your second paragraph began with “When Vindicator was arrested, he had been after her old foe, Jester, “ it might just be me but I had to pause and think “her but Vinducator us a he OHHH we're talking about Speedster. You may want to replace her with Speedster or Belinda. Otherwise, another fun superhero story. As always, well done.
I had fun reading this. Superhuman indeed!
06/12/21
Art, I'm waiting for the next "adventure" to come out! Are you doing a series? If you aren't, maybe you should be. (Sorry if I should already know this answer, I have been hit and miss lately on Faithwriters, having a story all my own and not worth much in the writing department) Keep writing for a large audience that loves this kind of writing and is in need of a Christian hint and message! Thanks!