The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/16
So very interesting. You tell the story of missionary work so vividly. One suggestion is to watch your past vs present tenses. I noted your switched a few times in your story.
Well written.
05/15/16
Excellent story! I really was riveted and completely absorbed by your entry.

Blessings~
05/15/16
Very enjoyable. As with many pf the entries this week, I saw little connection to the topic, other than you were traveling north.
05/19/16
I bet you were glad to unboard from that ship. You descriptions filled my senses although not with pleasant encounters. I really respect missionaries and all the sacrifices they make.