The Official Writing Challenge
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Heart filling. I love this.
06/08/14
I really enjoyed this piece. Well done. Thank you.
I liked how you brought the "Visitor" into the common daily event we might all go through.

This should encourage us to accept him in our daily walk through the common stuff.

It is well written and should be well received.
06/10/14
A very touching piece. The woman 'wounded and worn and worrying' an alliteration that truly described her emotional state, but the Visitor is always there to calm and soothe her fears. We are so thankful for Him being with her and also with us.