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12/15/13
Bravo, Bravo, Bravo on your fantastic use of dialogue!! It is so refreshing to read a manuscript where the writer actually gets dialogue and takes the reader with him on that rollicking, roiling stream of human speech that adds such flavor and drama to a great piece of writing. Kudos! And love the ending...
Most excellent portrayal of the rebellious self-centered heart . . .

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Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
You did a great job with this one. The suspense was great. I found myself guessing what was upsetting Jim. You surprised me in the end and that doesn't happen often. I always enjoy it when that happens. Good job.