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This is filled with the emotion that every soul experiences and will ring true to many folks. Jesus is our source of strength and hope and courage. It has good rhythm and rhyme, good message, conflict and resolution, and something every one can relate to. What's not to like? Good Job.
I love the way this makes me feel inside. Love the part of "Courage climbs on board." You have a mighty way with words and this is just lovely.

Beautiful! Nothing more to say. God bless~
I really enjoyed this. I thought it might be Jonah's story, but as I read on I realized it could be almost anyone's story. You did a wonderful job of going from the dark into the light and safety of Jesus.
I love that He answers the prayers and helps us through the splashes in our lives. Your message is beautiful here. Your use of "splash" was so effective.
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