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This is a nice devotion. The scriptures go nicely with your message.

My only suggestion might be to work on the transitions a bit. It felt as though you went abruptly from one thought to the next.

The prayer was absolutely beautiful. I thought it was a clever way to make your point about prayer being important by starting with a prayer and ending with one. This subtle message grabbed my attention and reminded me my day should be filled with prayer.
This is a charming testimony to the goodness of God, and the devotional aspect of the writing really lends to pointing your reader to God's riches of His truths and love.
Powerful and beautiful devotional. Thank you.

GOD Bless~
This was very special. To see Maria's dedication to the Lord, to basically plan ahead her trust and devotion to Him for a time when she would be challenge mentally, spoke volumes to me. This was well written and enjoyable from beginning to end.
Maria was truly blessed with such good, caring friends to pray for her and lift her up. Great story. God bless!
Thank you for sharing this. God bless.