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You make a very good point. I really enjoyed the first part of your article. I could easily see it as a devotion for the tween age group. It was well-written.
Obviously, our fellow writers are busy this weekend as you only have one comment so far AND this is absolutely adorable with so much diversity.

Loved the way you wrote a story and then changed directions.

Your mouse tale is sooooo cute. Just loved the "ugly human". I am still basking in my lol!

Your message is very ministering with good use of scripture. This was an all around delight for me. Thank You!
I really liked the little mouse story, and it would be perfect for young children. The devotional was terrific - well-written, perfect use of scripture and applicable. I just wasn't crazy about the combination of the two. The devotional is so great on its own, and would be enriched with an introduction using the analogy of mice caught in traps (just not the story format here). Your exposition of Biblical truth, though, is wonderful. Good job!
Congratulations on the top 40!