The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the way God works when we just ask. Thanks for the reminder.

Just a hint - it can be confusing when two characters in the same story have similar names. Try to not have characters with names with the same first letter in your story - the reader is less likely to confuse them. Also not sure of your tie-in to the topic, but I might have missed it.

This definitely felt like a real-life situation. Good job.
We ought to focus on the One who can solve the problem. Good story.