The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written and descriptive...nicely done.
I think I want that cottage! Nice story woven around the topic.
An interesting insight into the mind of a lonely individual. So often we think of vacations as exciting times but as your story points out, this is not always the case.
I wasn't sure where your MC was based. I'm guessing RSA but really it could be anywhere. Knowing this detail would have helped me to fix the details of the story more easily in my mind. Nicely done.
You did a good job of weaving this week's theme into your story. I like how this story is entertaining without there being a calamity of some sort. Well done!