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Wow. Powerful story on how little time we may have to find the answer to the longing within us. But I would have liked to be given a little more hope that that evening he found the answer and finally had a "real birthday". Well written!
This was a very believable scenario and held my attention throughout. Well written. Great title for the piece. Good job!
Blessings, Lynda
How many people have just such through-provoking questions lurking just under the surface? Your writing is so real and descriptive. You could envision both the scene and the inner man so clearly. Great job!
Almost too real, a well written story. Thank you for thinking outside of the box.
Well rounded character with believable thoughts and emotions. There is a glimmer of hope given, he knows something's missing. In my imagination I see him sinking a lot lower or flying a lot higher before he recognises who will fill the emptiness in his life.
A neat and well constructed story. While it was sad that the void was not filled, this piece spoke realistically about how many without Christ would feel... EMPTY! I very much enjoyed the genuineness of this piece! It would make a great opening for a home group discussion or a lead-in for a Bible study! Hats off on a job exceptionally done!!