The Official Writing Challenge
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Great lesson learned and shared.
Great illustration of chronic non-planning -- one I need to learn myself. I would have liked to see your examples given more detail. Great job bringing in some of the hidden consequences of unplanning as well.
Appealing character and ideas presented in this short entry. In fact, I wish there was more! Great message in this story.
A good lesson for all.

I'd love to have seen a bit more of this - maybe another scene, this one of her with the three p's as a contrast. Your first one is very descriptive - a second would only add to the piece.

Great details - keep writing!