The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/05
Interesting entry for "Christmas." It was definitely captivating - you have wonderful talent for fiction, a way of drawing the reader in and leaving them wanting more (which is the obvious goal of any writer!). If you are who I think you are, you've posted yet another excellent piece.
Blessings, Lynda
05/03/05
This one is tight and visual. Excellent writing style.. storyline is deep and moving. I like the dark overtones and the good that remained alive. Truely a talented author. This one will do well. Great job!
This took me to a world I've never been before. Great writing talent!
Excellent! I could see the whole scene. Could be a book excerpt. You made me care about Karen and Trent and wonder what was coming...and what went before.
05/15/05
Tightly written with well drawn characters. Good to be reminded that those outside the family of God have redeeming characteristics.