The Official Writing Challenge
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Realistic dialogue. I'm glad they reached out to Zayda before she needed it.
Know who your friends are, and help protect the naive if at all possible. Two good messages for teens. Realistic dialog. I like it.
Your dialogue seems very realistic. I'm sure many girls can relate to the experience of being "used" by other girls. I like your solution to the problem. Niced job!
Very good writing and a story any teen can identify with. I like the dialog, too.
I thought you tagged the genre well and enjoyed reading this story. It held my interest with just the right mix of dialogue and action. I also believe you could reach a teen with this as they would be more likely to relate to the language. good job!!