The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very crisp writing with nouns and verbs that just come alive here. I loved what I took away as an alternative Sci Fi story on Saul/Paul.
Oh, very good! Wonderful writing, and I'd love to see this expanded.
Oooh! Loved this! Very creative, everything just sort of came alive and continued on, I was kind of disappointed that it ended so quickly, but the ending itself was excellent. Good job!
Agree with Jan, this is begging to be expanded. Great writing!
The ending was perfect for this well-told story.
Great detail in a short space - I would also love to see more of this! Excellent.